The Commoner’s Feet (The Walker’s Feet)


Ugly, bare and cracked.
Jiggered, crooked feet.
Blistered, sore feet.

The commoner’s ugly feet plod.
Plod, plod, plod.

Ever the followers, this way.
Ever the followers, that way.
Ever the followers, any way. Any!
Never blazing a trail.

Plod. Plop. Flop.
Plop. Flop. Plod.
Flop. Plod. Plop.

Common man’s feet walking Uncommon man’s talk.

Common feet hurrying, shuffling, wobbling, tripping.
Common feet stepping on common feet,
Stampeding commons trampling commons; to walk…
The Uncommon Big Foot’s talk.

Common she-feet and common he-feet and common they-feet
Plodding and plopping and…



One response to this post.

  1. Posted by elizabeth on January 18, 2013 at 14:00

    creative nice


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